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             I think a public argument i'd like to use is being for The Advancements in VR Technology for the medical, entertainment, and education fields. I believe that these advancements are criticized and judged only because they are too advanced and scare the portion of the world that is "too in there own ways" to see how it can be beneficial to society. 

               Some moves i noticed that my 3 examples are engaging in a debate, using evidence to support an argument, and a overall smooth transition to a conclusion. one of mine however differed and was the only critiquing another writer's argument. All of these sound like very good moves to make as prepare to write my WP1 and I intend to apply these moves in order to create a good point and argument that can be supported through them. 
             
           

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